Comments on: Winter Rain, part 16 http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-16/ by Chris Poirier Fri, 25 Nov 2011 04:54:00 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.9.1 By: Chris Poirier http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-16/comment-page-1/#comment-279 Tue, 24 Jun 2008 20:31:52 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=73#comment-279 Of course.  I forgot about the side-benefits.  :-)

]]> By: Bacchante http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-16/comment-page-1/#comment-278 Tue, 24 Jun 2008 20:28:59 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=73#comment-278 RSS feed. Probably a good idea, but I don’t know. If I have to check every site individually, that kills some of my time even if nobody’s updated :P Must! Dodge! Work!

]]> By: Chris Poirier http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-16/comment-page-1/#comment-277 Tue, 24 Jun 2008 02:14:19 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=73#comment-277 Hi Bacchante — thanks for your comment.  You guys are making my day.  :-)  Do consider the RSS feed — laziness is always a good thing!

Hi Sarah — mmmm, munceon meat!  (Ha!)  I had actually intended both spellings.  I’ll think about “audible”, though — there are a lot of “lys” there.  Thanks!

]]> By: Bacchante http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-16/comment-page-1/#comment-276 Mon, 23 Jun 2008 23:21:54 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=73#comment-276 Hello, found this today, consider it added to my daily list to check for updates. I’m enjoying it so far, thanks for sharing.

]]> By: srsuleski http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-16/comment-page-1/#comment-275 Mon, 23 Jun 2008 22:38:56 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=73#comment-275 Mmmmmm. . . . fried luncheon charred meat.  :)

The nightlife crowd are out,

crowds

“No,” she replies, barely audibly.

I think “barely audible” would read better.  Less ly’s.

Can’t wait to see what Tiergan’s up to. :D

]]> By: Chris Poirier http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-16/comment-page-1/#comment-274 Mon, 23 Jun 2008 18:10:50 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=73#comment-274 Thanks Katie!  I’m very glad you are enjoying it.  :-)

]]> By: Katie http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-16/comment-page-1/#comment-273 Mon, 23 Jun 2008 18:06:08 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=73#comment-273 it’s excellent so far. :) Wondering what the deal is with these guys. There’s so much going on I can’t wait to read more!

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