Comments on: Winter Rain, part 23 http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-23/ by Chris Poirier Fri, 25 Nov 2011 04:54:00 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.9.1 By: Showeda http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-23/comment-page-2/#comment-348 Tue, 21 Jul 2009 00:47:36 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=83#comment-348 At first I didn’t know if it was Tiergan who was unsure of the ‘phonetics’ (being younger etc) but like the way it emerged . . . ‘I need a full language . . . ‘ Difficult to grasp . . . Would never have occurred to me to include this angle . . . That’s why I’m reading I suppose..

]]> By: Chris Poirier http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-23/comment-page-1/#comment-347 Thu, 25 Sep 2008 13:42:44 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=83#comment-347 Hi Miladysa — not at all — I very much appreciate you taking the time.  :-)  I don’t expect I’ll reply to all of them, because I won’t always have something intelligent (or plot safe) to say, but rest assured that I’m reading every one, and enjoying it.

]]> By: Miladysa http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-23/comment-page-1/#comment-346 Thu, 25 Sep 2008 08:54:24 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=83#comment-346 My dog just looked at me [the wolf in my sitting room] and his look took my thoughts back to this chapter.  Maybe telepathy could play a part here?  It’s not too far fetched, my dog seems to communicate with me that way! LOL

[Let me know if my constant comments irritate you.]

]]> By: Miladysa http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-23/comment-page-1/#comment-345 Thu, 25 Sep 2008 08:38:19 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=83#comment-345 “maybe I can get away with changing, maybe the cameras won’t see.  I need a full language, and I need it now. “

These two lines worked really well for me and added an extra depth.

I was a little uneasy with “I bark a warning again—stop, danger—” the “stop,danger” jarred at little at first.

]]> By: Chris Poirier http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-23/comment-page-1/#comment-344 Fri, 04 Jul 2008 03:38:11 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=83#comment-344 Dylan is now officially the soundtrack of Winter Rain!  Thanks, Vercin — that’s great.  :-)

]]> By: Vercin http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-23/comment-page-1/#comment-343 Fri, 04 Jul 2008 03:03:43 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=83#comment-343 WIND CHANGE

The line it is drawn
The curse it is cast
The slow one now
Will later be fast
As the present now
Will later be past
The order is
Rapidly fadin’.
And the first one now
Will later be last
For the winds they are a-changin’.

(OK, it’s a bad ripoff, but c’mon . . . I thought of it, wasn’t -quite- sure how it went . . . and tell me it doesn’t fit perfectly here :D )

]]> By: Bacchante http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-23/comment-page-1/#comment-342 Thu, 03 Jul 2008 21:50:11 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=83#comment-342 Of course as soon as things start to almost kind of work, there’s a gunshot. That’s how it feels for me, too. :P

]]> By: Chris Poirier http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-23/comment-page-1/#comment-341 Thu, 03 Jul 2008 21:46:01 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=83#comment-341 Don’t blame me!  Blame that rat bastard, Rian!  :-D

]]> By: Drew Daniels http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-23/comment-page-1/#comment-340 Thu, 03 Jul 2008 21:39:45 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=83#comment-340 Blargle!! I was all “Yay! Happy ending!” And now a gunshot cliffhanger?! SO mean . . . 

]]> By: srsuleski http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-23/comment-page-1/#comment-339 Thu, 03 Jul 2008 21:38:01 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=83#comment-339 Ee!  WHO HAS BEEN SHOT??

(Also, I am making smart ass comments in my head and you can’t stop me!)

It must be a bitch to be able to think in coherent sentences but not speak in them.

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