Comments on: Winter Rain, part 37 http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-37/ by Chris Poirier Fri, 25 Nov 2011 04:54:00 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.9.1 By: Showeda http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-37/comment-page-2/#comment-478 Tue, 11 Aug 2009 21:01:37 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=102#comment-478 It’s so nice to be back reading this story . . . Don’t get Tiergan to over explain . . . I’m with him all the way . . . Even the barely disguised contempt . . . Aidan’s goading him . . . So fair enough

]]> By: Chris Poirier http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-37/comment-page-2/#comment-477 Mon, 02 Mar 2009 18:42:45 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=102#comment-477 Probably, but I try to resist the urge to have Tiergan explain things like that.  I haven’t always succeeded — but when I’ve failed, those are the parts I really dislike, the ones I most want to rewrite.  :-(

]]> By: G.S. Williams http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-37/comment-page-1/#comment-476 Mon, 02 Mar 2009 18:40:34 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=102#comment-476 Sorry about last chapter’s comments — this chapter explained it.  But maybe the clarity of last chapter would be helped if Tiergan’s narration mentioned he had to arrange passage to get to Carrigan?

]]> By: Chris Poirier http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-37/comment-page-1/#comment-475 Thu, 25 Sep 2008 14:30:33 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=102#comment-475 Fixed — thanks.

]]> By: Miladysa http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-37/comment-page-1/#comment-474 Thu, 25 Sep 2008 09:46:32 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=102#comment-474 “You don’t look like you could fight off a dog. – Quotation mark missing I think?

]]> By: Chris Poirier http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-37/comment-page-1/#comment-473 Tue, 09 Sep 2008 14:07:58 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=102#comment-473 Thanks — fixed.

]]> By: Kitty http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-37/comment-page-1/#comment-472 Tue, 09 Sep 2008 12:48:06 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=102#comment-472 Last paragraph: “I look around from something to hit, but there’s nothing convenient.” 

Should be “for” not “from”, no?

Otherwise, great stuff :)

]]> By: srsuleski http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-37/comment-page-1/#comment-471 Wed, 20 Aug 2008 22:21:09 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=102#comment-471 I’d like to do violent things to Aiden.

]]> By: Chris Poirier http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-37/comment-page-1/#comment-470 Thu, 14 Aug 2008 14:42:29 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=102#comment-470 Doh!  Thanks.  :-)

]]> By: Kunama http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-37/comment-page-1/#comment-469 Thu, 14 Aug 2008 11:22:17 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=102#comment-469 I see a typo in the first line.

Keira’s – Keaira’s

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