Comments on: Winter Rain, part 38 http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-38/ by Chris Poirier Fri, 25 Nov 2011 04:54:00 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.9.1 By: Showeda http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-38/comment-page-2/#comment-490 Tue, 11 Aug 2009 21:10:41 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=103#comment-490 It worked . . . But I’m kind of sorry she took that half step . . . Don’t really know why either . . . Also annoyed that Tiregan mouthed ‘sorry’ . . . We’ll see . . . 

]]> By: Miladysa http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-38/comment-page-2/#comment-489 Thu, 25 Sep 2008 09:50:18 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=103#comment-489 The path of true love never ran smooth and if it did it would be soooo boring to read about! :-D

]]> By: Stig Hemmer http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-38/comment-page-1/#comment-488 Wed, 03 Sep 2008 23:21:12 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=103#comment-488 Poor poor lad.  Poor poor lass.

]]> By: Chris Poirier http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-38/comment-page-1/#comment-487 Fri, 22 Aug 2008 01:17:16 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=103#comment-487 Yay!

]]> By: Vercin http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-38/comment-page-1/#comment-486 Fri, 22 Aug 2008 00:55:37 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=103#comment-486 The goal of a good writer shouldn’t be to maintain a uniformly consistent ‘voice’ on every page of their story. It should be to tell a damn good story.

No complaints bout this chapter :D

]]> By: Chris Poirier http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-38/comment-page-1/#comment-485 Wed, 20 Aug 2008 23:56:44 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=103#comment-485 Hi Sonja, hi Sarah.  Thanks for the feedback — I appreciate it.  A week later, this ep feels a little off to me — voice seems a bit different from the norm — but I still like it.  And it’s sounding like it’s doing what it is supposed to for you guys, so, yay!

Of course, if anyone out there read it and thought “what the hell was that?”, please feel free to take up the other side of the discussion.  :-)

]]> By: srsuleski http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-38/comment-page-1/#comment-484 Wed, 20 Aug 2008 22:25:36 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=103#comment-484 :(

You did an excellent job of showing how much Tiergan loves her . . . and how sad is that . . . 

]]> By: Sonja http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-38/comment-page-1/#comment-483 Sun, 17 Aug 2008 04:22:32 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=103#comment-483 Still reading it, still loving it.

I like how you portrayed the wolf aspect, and yet kept it human too.

]]> By: Chris Poirier http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-38/comment-page-1/#comment-482 Fri, 15 Aug 2008 04:21:41 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=103#comment-482 Hi Katie, Paizleigh — thanks guys!  I quite liked the way this one turned out, but had concerns I was going to be alone in that.  I’m glad to know it worked for you, too.  Thanks for commenting.

]]> By: Paizleigh http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-38/comment-page-1/#comment-481 Fri, 15 Aug 2008 01:36:33 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=103#comment-481 What a bitter-sweet emotionally charged chapter. Thank you much, can’t wait for more

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