Comments on: Winter Rain, part 55 http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-55/ by Chris Poirier Fri, 25 Nov 2011 04:54:00 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.9.1 By: Chris Poirier http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-55/comment-page-2/#comment-724 Thu, 13 Aug 2009 03:20:27 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=135#comment-724 Nicely done.  And the typo is fixed — thanks.  :-)

]]> By: Showeda http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-55/comment-page-2/#comment-723 Thu, 13 Aug 2009 03:14:14 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=135#comment-723 I agree . . . Tossing keys in long grass they will never be found . . . 
Also tiny typo . . . 

‘He lands with an wet, squishy thud on top of Declan.’ . . . ‘with a wet..’

You know I can feel myself slowing down . . . I don’t want to catch you up . . . Just in case I have to wait for pages . . . That would be way too tantalising for words . . . See what I did there . . . ?! :)

]]> By: Chris Poirier http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-55/comment-page-2/#comment-722 Mon, 12 Jan 2009 14:59:14 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=135#comment-722 Have you ever tried to find keys in a grassy field when you don’t know exactly where to start looking?  Trust me, he’s fine.  (Doh!)

]]> By: Kitty http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-55/comment-page-2/#comment-721 Mon, 12 Jan 2009 12:44:32 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=135#comment-721 I’m wondering why he tossed the keys away, since they could conceivably be found.  Wouldn’t it be better to just hang onto them?

]]> By: Chris Poirier http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-55/comment-page-2/#comment-720 Tue, 21 Oct 2008 00:19:07 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=135#comment-720 Hi Grimm — thanks for commenting!  I’m glad to hear you’ve been enjoying the story.  And don’t worry, if you stick around, I’m sure I’ll have an occasional cliffhanger for you, yet.  ;-)

]]> By: Grimm http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-55/comment-page-1/#comment-719 Mon, 20 Oct 2008 23:59:39 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=135#comment-719 Just finished catching up all the way with this story. I’m impressed to say the least. Your fluidity is smooth, both in plot movement and word flow. I especially enjoy this story because of the viewpoint it’s told from (a nonhuman view point e.g. Watership Down-esque). The main character is involving and the frequent cliffhangers are compelling (glad I didn’t have to wait for the next installment). So yes, very good work with this story, I shall keep my eyes on it.

]]> By: Sonja http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-55/comment-page-1/#comment-718 Mon, 20 Oct 2008 22:27:59 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=135#comment-718 “We’re wolves, not humans—we don’t play each other this way.” — also my fave line.

]]> By: Chris Poirier http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-55/comment-page-1/#comment-717 Mon, 20 Oct 2008 21:29:15 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=135#comment-717 Of course he does — Tiergan’s being terribly naîve.  ;-)

]]> By: srsuleski http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-55/comment-page-1/#comment-716 Mon, 20 Oct 2008 20:30:18 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=135#comment-716 Nice banner. :D

I do feel inclined to point out that Faolan, at least, certainly plays other wolves in a rather human way. ;)

]]> By: Chris Poirier http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/part-55/comment-page-1/#comment-715 Mon, 20 Oct 2008 02:05:35 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=135#comment-715 It is pretty, ain’t it.  :-)  Gail rocks!

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