Comments on: Winter Rain, part 2

By: Chris Poirier

Chris Poirier — Thu, 20 Oct 2011 20:07:00 +0000

‘Fraid not.

By: Daniel Bensen

Daniel Bensen — Thu, 20 Oct 2011 14:53:00 +0000

I'm going to guess . . . vampires?

By: Ian

Ian — Fri, 06 Mar 2009 20:02:01 +0000

I'm surprised at how quickly he comes across the table too. I feel it would be better if you took more time to build up to that.

By: Chris Poirier

Chris Poirier — Sun, 22 Feb 2009 23:46:01 +0000

Cool. Well, the good news is the site will be here tomorrow, hackers allowing.

By: Sandra Fowke

Sandra Fowke — Sun, 22 Feb 2009 23:38:34 +0000

Alright so I'm hooked and I want to read this all in one go but I can't lol. Damned real life, anyway i love this second installment.

The Line: "He tightens his hand down a little more—slowly, carefully . . . rapturously." Beautiful and perfect in the what it's trying to say.

By: Miladysa

Miladysa — Wed, 24 Sep 2008 20:56:34 +0000

"I can hear the smile" - LOVE it!

I like what I have read so far.

By: Sara

Sara — Tue, 24 Jun 2008 14:14:58 +0000

Ah, I see they're in a cafe. I like his thoughts under threat — the analysis of what this antagonist can get away with. I'm getting some sort of take on the situation. This episode is lively, interesting me to read more.

By: Chris Poirier

Chris Poirier — Wed, 04 Jun 2008 09:24:30 +0000

Thanks Drew — you've made me very happy. :-) Yeah, I've come to love first person, present tense, over the last few years. Takes a bit of getting used to, but it has this wonderful immediacy to it. Makes everything feel important. Still, it's really easy to screw it up. I trust you'll tell me if I do.

By: Drew Daniels

Drew Daniels — Wed, 04 Jun 2008 08:16:49 +0000

I really like it thus far. To the point that even though I knew there were only two parts of it, I still found myself dissapointed that there wasn't a "Next" button.

I really dig the style too, though I will admit it throws me off. I'm not used to reading in the current tense, with the descriptions seeming to come straight out of an inner monologue.

I wish I could help with a Title for it, but thats usually something that simply smacks an author upside the head without warning.

But I digress . . . Well done sir, I look forward to the next installment. RSSes

By: Chris Poirier

Chris Poirier — Tue, 03 Jun 2008 22:37:01 +0000

Yay! I’m also fairly happy with it. I especially like this unplanned, no editing thing. We’ll see how long I can keep it going.

Of course, if it does go on much longer, I’ll have to come up with a title for it.