Comments on: Winter Rain, part 66 http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/winter-rain-part-66/ by Chris Poirier Fri, 25 Nov 2011 04:54:00 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.9.1 By: srsuleski http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/winter-rain-part-66/comment-page-1/#comment-878 Fri, 13 Feb 2009 01:46:27 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=180#comment-878 I do try. :)

]]> By: Chris Poirier http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/winter-rain-part-66/comment-page-1/#comment-877 Thu, 12 Feb 2009 17:03:47 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=180#comment-877 Vercin, MeiLin: cool.  Good to hear.  :-)

Eleonora: I’m quite the fan of ellipses myself, if you hadn’t noticed.  ;-)  Yes, the story has been a bit . . . low-tension since starting back.  As much as I prefer tension, I’m finding it hard to find a good excuse, here in the middle of the story.  We’ll see what happens.  And thanks for commenting!

]]> By: Eleonora http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/winter-rain-part-66/comment-page-1/#comment-876 Thu, 12 Feb 2009 16:48:09 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=180#comment-876 I really really liked the last two chapters. They are so intense. I think it’s because lately the chapters were mostly story. A lot happened, but . . . Well I can’t really describe it. I think I just like the emotional stuff better.
It’s the end of the day now, and I’m a bit tired, and I’m reading far too fast skipping words, but that kind of makes it read a bit surreal, or more real . . . 
I should stop commenting if I can’t be clearer. Too many triple dots.

]]> By: MeiLin Miranda http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/winter-rain-part-66/comment-page-1/#comment-875 Wed, 11 Feb 2009 01:55:15 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=180#comment-875 Worth the read. :) Not many people can pull off first person present, and you did here, very well.

]]> By: Vercin http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/winter-rain-part-66/comment-page-1/#comment-874 Wed, 11 Feb 2009 01:54:10 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=180#comment-874 I liked it. Best line? “Yeah, six more.  Good thing you already drank them.”

However, “And this isn’t just the alcohol talking.  It doesn’t lie to me.  It just makes me stop lying to myself.” wins big points for reality.

]]> By: Chris Poirier http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/winter-rain-part-66/comment-page-1/#comment-873 Wed, 11 Feb 2009 00:28:26 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=180#comment-873 Miladsya — thanks.  Glad you liked it.  :-)

Sarah — well, I was thinking the former, but you have managed to surprise me.  :-P

]]> By: srsuleski http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/winter-rain-part-66/comment-page-1/#comment-872 Wed, 11 Feb 2009 00:26:53 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=180#comment-872 Say what?  That we haven’t met Torrin yet, or that you should commission Gail to do a picture of this scene?  (Naken Tiergan curled up with Garvey).

]]> By: Miladysa http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/winter-rain-part-66/comment-page-1/#comment-871 Tue, 10 Feb 2009 13:27:12 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=180#comment-871 It’s brilliant!  Oozes passion and extremely well observed!

After reading this I thought about the writer and wondered how long you spent observing dogs while you composed this in your head. Either that or you really are a werewolf :D

]]> By: Chris Poirier http://couragemyfriend.org/fiction/winter-rain/story/winter-rain-part-66/comment-page-1/#comment-870 Tue, 10 Feb 2009 13:15:14 +0000 http://fiction.courage-my-friend.org/?p=180#comment-870 Can’t say if this one will work for anybody else, but it pretty much wrote itself, once it got going.

And yes, Sarah, go ahead and say it.  You know you want to.  ;-)

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